dimecres, 16 de novembre del 2011

THE KINGS SPEECH

PS+PC
1.The king was talking when his wife come in .             
2.The kings was going to the doctor when his
wife started to talk whith him.
3.When he started to talk, everiyone was paying attention.
4. The King was reading the speech when scddanly he stopped talking.

PC+ PC 
 1.The doctor was teaching the king while he was practing.
2.The king was talking while his friend was he cording to him.
3.Lionel was teaching bety while he was singin
4.when he was having speaking clacs , his wife waitins for him.
PS+PC
1.When the kings finished the spech, all the people congratulated him.
2.when the king finished the speech the people clopped
3.after he finished talking everyone congratulated and clopped

1 comentari:

  1. Good job, Dani!

    MISTAKES:

    1)"The king was talking when his wife come in". Spelling mistake-- "CAME IN".

    2) "When he started to talk, everiyone was paying attention."- Spelling mistake-- "EVERYONE"

    3)"The King was reading the speech when scddanly he stopped talking." Spelling mistake-- "SUDDENLY"

    4)"The king was talking while his friend was he cording to him." Spelling mistake "RECORDING".

    4)"when he was having speaking clacs , his wife waitins for him." Spelling mistake and grammar mistake-- "CLASS" "His wife WAS waiting for him".

    5)"when the king finished the speech the people clopped" "after he finished talking everyone congratulated and clopped". Spelling mistake-- "CLAPPED".

    Please, do the corrections.

    ResponElimina